1. Take a minute to post the Law you have decided to concentrate on. Let us know who you think would make a good audience and why. Also, who you think can help you get information or where where you think you can get more information on this Law?
2. When you have posted, read your classmates ideas. You must respond to at least 3 other students posts. Suggest other information you may know about the law, other resources to learn more about the law from etc.
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My topic is going to be about court meaning young teenagers going to juvie and stuff like that. I think i could get info from people i no that is all ready there, also i would research it or families that experienced it. My audience will be someone really close to me and the young teens in the community. I choose this because it is a topic really close to me.
The law that I have decided to concentrate on is the Abortion Law.I think that the class would be a great audience because I like the way that they give me feed back.I think that I can go on a website or my community health center.
I am writing a Journalistic Feature Articles about abortion laws in the United State. I think young girl who got raped would be a good audience. I readly don't know who to ask.
1. The law that I want to talk about is immigration law. Who I think would make the best audience would be a immigrants and maybe the department of immigration because their in charge of immigrants in our country and the immigrants would read because they would like to know who supports them and what people have to say about it. I think I could definitly get it from home, and on the internet.
1.) The Law I decided to concentrate on is Gay Marriage laws. A good audience will be people who support gay marriage or who is in a marriage with their own genre. My family and friends can help me look for more information on the law.
The law that i am deciding to do the Drinking Age Law. I think the people who are almost the age of drinking and the people who are old enough to drink. This would interest these people because because now a days there are a lot of teens that like to drink. I think that some family members.
The law I decided to do is gun laws. I pick this law because i feel it has a lot to do with the violence in Boston(DON'T EVEN TRY TO SWAG MY TOPIC). the people who i think would make a good audience is teens of these communities who are getting affected by all the violence , also the damn police who so call make out commmunities a better place and s call put crime committers away.
I can get information form the internet, newspapers, and more
Nubian
I am also doing abortion laws.
1. A Drinking law is what i am concentrating on. I think people who like to drink would be a good audience. Why because of what they do it connects to what they do. I think if i knew someone who drink i can get information from them. Or i can get information from a search engine like Google or Yahoo.
Unita i really like your topic and i think i i would like to help you with that if it's Okay with you
The law that I wanted to write about is immigration the people that are going to be a very important audience are the immigrant that are in the United State and they wanted to know what kind of right they have as immigrant. The person that could help me get information is my mom and some of my family that were immigrant and I could ask my teachers to help me get more information in the internet.
The law that I picked was cell phone law people who often drive while talking on their cell phone. The audience I could talk to is the people who be on their phone alot. I can get information from people who has cell phones and the internet.
The law that i have chosen to write about is Welfare Laws. I would like to know and get informed about the government supporting people with welfare. I'd like to learn what it is all about, the WIC office's supporting children and other things. A good audience would be all those who put down people by welfare. If would effect those who are on welfare , it would also come to those who think they support people by giving their money to the government. I think the internet is a great place to find info on Welfare laws. My sister gets WIC for my niece so I'm sure she knows about it also. inc....
The topic that i am going to pick is Abortion Law. I think people in the world should know what is happening to these baby. Your really just taking a life away. i don't know what article it is going in but i will find out as we go on.
i want so much laws but i think my top 2 choices that i want is immigration law or cell phone law. i think the age of my audience that will read my article is teens && up. the reason why i said that is because cell phone law is basically for teens && like for the immigration is like for older people.....
Ms.Geralda
I would love for you to help me with my Journalistic Featues Article on abortion. We will talk more about it in class.
Ms.Geralda
I would love for you to help me with my Journalistic Featues Article on abortion. We will talk more about it in class.
I agree with your topic Kimberly because this problem happens a lot in our community and someone in our community needs to step up to the plate. Nubian
1. The topic that I am going to work on is on Abortion. Is a law that it's important and i want to work on. The people that can help me with it is Unita we are doing the same Law.
music copyrighting
age groups of 10-56 years old.
The people in the music indusrty and the people who makes instrumentals.
The music makers well be mad because if they make the music and working hard making the music and they are not taking no credit because sometimes it can be very scary because when you have made the song and other people copy you and then the bid music makers look at you as if you copied it.Because these people go through a everyday life with music and this world would be i dont know with out music so everyone have to listen to music.
who can help is the makers of bearshare, limewire and the music industry.they can help by when they search for the music they should ask for a price before they download it that can help a lot of artist like them making money.
Nubian we can work together to do the law of abortion and discuss our ideas.
The topic im concentrating on is violence in the community. A good audience would be people that would care about the situation and people from the state and what not. People and others that are involved in this topic that wants to help can help me get the information or the major and police. This way they can tell me about how many violence have caused so far the reason why.
Kayla you can also help me with the abortion law and any details that you have that can help me.
i agree with kimberly but how would you think people going to react when you ask them questions about that topic?
1. The law that i have decide to concentrate on is driving under the influence. I think that teens and young adults would make a good audience. I can go to Google and search and i think Mrs.Jackson would give me some information on it as well.
I can also use resources like Google.com or ask people with experience of abortion or that have family members with that type of experience.
Nubian, I think that your law is very important because some people don't the seriousness about it.
i agree with you geralda ,usually teens are really involved in that topic and maybe you can think of a plan to unite with someone people and ask them questions if its possible.
Marsha, I also think that your topic is important because some people don't know that immigrants can do the same thing that citizens are capable of doing.
Nubian i think that the abortion law is a very good choice. I think you could or should use images for your article to.
i agree with you makeda those are probably the main laws as well. how would you try to stop the immigration law though?
Shanikia I think that's good. I agree with you on that you can find information on the internet 2
Shanika, I think that people need to know that marriage is something you do when your in love it don't matter with what gender. People might not agree with it but they just have to accept it.
Marsha
I think that there should be an immergration law because they should be allowed to come to america
Katiria,
Violence in the community is I think very important.
People need to know fact and information about what going on because they need to know what way they could help or so. I think people that comment violence would probably read it too because it's more for them to know what they do and what conseqences and such.
Shanikia when you research the gay marriage law and should ask ms.jackson to help you out with the subject.
The law that I picked is medical practice law . what would make a good audience is the people that want to be in the medical field . to get more information about my topic i could ask my family members because they are in the medical field.
Unita that a good topic to write about because a lot of people are going to be reading your article and a lot of teen are going to be reading your article.
Nubian I think that that's a good law to do because 2 many people are getting abortion and that murder. So good job
Ms.Geralda
I agree with you on your topic and I will not swag your topic. This is a good topic for teenage kids who are affected by it.
1)I want concentrate voting laws. I decided to focus on only the audience that can vote. To me it makes no sense to focus on groups that can't vote. Of course the internet is the most resourceful source.
2)kimberly- if you know some ask kids who went to juvie. Research the internet on juvies.
nubian- I feel that you are focusing on a real touchy topic. Be careful on what you report on.
Marsha- Immigrants is a very much talked about topic. So really use more of the new cast internet sites to help you
I think that you did good jaylen because you put a lot of thought into your article and your topic.
NUBIAN
Briana pick up cell phone is a very good topic because there have beeing a lot of accident because people are answer there cell phone.
I agree with jaylen because people probably would want to know why they cant copyright music and what consequences
Tremain I think that's also a good law because drinking could get people killed cause some people don't know how to control it.
My law is the law of children custody or adoption. I get all my information from the news or from the internet. i think my best audience can be your parents or students or what they think about that.
Nubian
Nubian you have a really good topic because to many girls are getting abortion if they don't want a kid don't lay down. If they get riped that is something different I understand that.
Tremain I think that drinking is a good law people be getting killed by drinking and some times people don't know how to control it.
Deshana that a very good topic because i wanted be a doctor and i am going to be learning knew information about your article and i really wanted to read you article because i am going to learn knew information.
The law that i have decided to focus on is the drinking age. I think this will make a great audience to the younger males females. The younger males & females would be interested because a lot of feel like they should not me punished for something that another teenager did.
I think that i can get more information from police officers. They see drunk drivers almost everyday & they talk to the drunk drivers on why they were drinking & driving.
Nubian,
I think that you have a great idea but i think that u should try to talk or search Parents that have had Abortions. They Would be able to give a lot more information.
Jaylen,
You also have a great idea but i think that you should try to see what rap artist think about copy write.
Ms.Geralda,
I think that you should not only look at the bad side. You should also think about how it is not safe anymore to not have something too protect yourself.
Keiwanna, your topic is going to have to put a lot of effort foth to. However, you would have to consider while writing this, that ther have been seconf thoughts on driving age. Think about how this is another reason why the driving age might increase.
Kayla, even if you are against abortion think of the postive and the negative. You cannot base your opinions on the topic only. So take a good look at both sides of the story. what if a young girl where to get raped, would abortion be an option?
Gay marriage laws are a great topic to speak about. Right now, Pres. Bush is tryin to make it in the constitution be HE does'nt wan gay maraige. Gay marriage, you might have a little bit of difficulty with because there are also religions that touch base with gay marriage and a lot of other topics tha clash with it to make it possible to talk about Gay marriage. However, every citizen is entitled to their natural rights.
Geguel
I think the law you picked was intersting because we talk alot about immigration in Ms. Jackson's class. Plus I like that you want to know more about the law. I think another good resources is looking in history books.
Unita
I notice that you are writing about abortion. I think where you can get your information is from google or any search engine sight and type in abortion laws or something similar.
Shankia
You said that your concentrating on Gay Marriage. I think thats a good law to think about. If were doing that law. I would go talk to someone who you know who is Gay and ask them how they feel about the law. Or i would look at a search engine sight and type in Gay Marraige law information.
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